Monday 6 February 2012

Initial Feedback

After showing the class our rough cut we received some feedback...




This is a picture of our feedback, the general summary was that:
-not enough variety of shots, the song has a lot of chorus and only a few verses and we used the same shots for the chorus, which caused some repetitiveness for our audience.
- story line was not clear and our song did not promote the artist because it was a narrative and not a performance.
-The strobe lights used in our rough cut, although some liked the effects they were not bright enough and so some of the shots were not very clear.
- In our animatic we underestimated how long it would take to film something and so our ending lasted longer than the actual music which needs to be changed.

Looking back at our rough cut we all decided that we needed to make some major changes...

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